by pinkalias Dec 20, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
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Your candy coated soul is sugar to my veins |
by Shædow Poet
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I was sure I'd read and commented on this poem... for some reason comments I make seem to disappear sometimes :| it's really freaky. |
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I dont really know what to say...i think it's good. But i think u were trying somthing out her. |
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good job! your a gifted writer... haha thats great that you are opened to criticism but, i have none! |
by Edina
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wow that is such a beautiful poem keep it up !! take care |
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