Subliminal Message

by cuddelyxbutxviciousXxX   Dec 20, 2004


I am the demonic voice inside your head
I'm the one driving you insane
I'm the one bringing you back from the dead
Can't you feel me damaging your brain?

Your "friends" never cared about you
They were just there to watch you fall
To watch you fail, to be mean and cruel
Do you hear me, kill them all!

Can you feel me, my puppet, do my bidding
Help me kill your so called friends
Don't worry about your soul your not sinning
Help me bring this to an end

Let us go now, it is time for the pleading
They have betrayed you for the last time
Good, now that they're dead and bleeding
It's your turn, join me for your soul is MINE!!!

"I'm sorry if I have offended anybody who read this poem."

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    Do not worry about offending others. You can't keep from offending them all the time, so just write wfor yourself, and if they are offedned, then who cares. Great poets aren't great because they worried about what other people thought, or went with the same flow, but because they were different and created rifts in the literary and social world.

  • 19 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    This is the best rhyming i think i have read from your poems, it rhymed, but didn't stand out. I didn't take extra notice that is good. The meters and such are good too.

  • 19 years ago

    by cuddelyxbutxviciousXxX

    thanks hero!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! really creative! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    I appreciate you're apology, it hasn't affended me, but it's good to see you care lol. You're poem is good, very descriptive. Keep writing.

Read All Comments (5)

More Poems By cuddelyxbutxviciousXxX