I appreciate you're apology, it hasn't affended me, but it's good to see you care lol. You're poem is good, very descriptive. Keep writing.

great poem! i love it! really creative! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

thanks hero!!

This is the best rhyming i think i have read from your poems, it rhymed, but didn't stand out. I didn't take extra notice that is good. The meters and such are good too.

Do not worry about offending others. You can't keep from offending them all the time, so just write wfor yourself, and if they are offedned, then who cares. Great poets aren't great because they worried about what other people thought, or went with the same flow, but because they were different and created rifts in the literary and social world.