I agree with theunforgiven1. No matter if it's true or not, you did an excellent job describing. However, if it is true, I'm here for ya!

~Ciao Lipton

wow that's amazing! I love it! that's just how it really is! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

That was a really good poem. Tells it like it is, very good discription. Keep up the good work ;).
*Mike*