by CinnamonTwirl Dec 20, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
My heart was on line |
I wrote this poem while we were still together...just like...in anticipation of up breaking up. We're still "together" now but its like...really rocky and we should break up, and quick. |
by ca
you still love him don't you? |
by Amit
very nice poem, but not the very best use of rhyme. hope you'll do better in future within no time. keep writing |
omg! thank you so much! you have no idea what this means to me! wow...im near tears, which is slightly pathetic but true none the less. |
thankx for the honest comments everyone |