thankx for the honest comments everyone

omg! thank you so much! you have no idea what this means to me! wow...im near tears, which is slightly pathetic but true none the less.

very nice poem, but not the very best use of rhyme. hope you'll do better in future within no time. keep writing

take care, 5! always believe in love

♥ amit ♥

you still love him don't you?

I wrote this poem while we were still together...just like...in anticipation of up breaking up. We're still "together" now but its like...really rocky and we should break up, and quick.