dis poem is gud! i kinda got abit confused as im unsure of wot ur talkin about der, but dnt chnge it, i tink its gud as it is now, bcuz it keeps it open if u get wot i mean. its open in a way dat most people would be able to relate2it woteva posistion der in. plz read, rate and comment on my poems plz, it would mean so much to me xx