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by Heather M Craig   Dec 21, 2004


TITLE: His Criticism/ Your Work

* this is dedicated to Rohit on this site...he was going to quit writing because he got a bad comment but i am here to tell him that His work rocks!!! Help me prove it to him thanks.~*

His Criticism,
ignorance.
Your work,
sheer brilliance.

His criticism,
narrowed horizon.
Your work,
so mesmerizing.

His criticism,
absolutely nothing.
Your work,
gonna be something.

His criticism,
close minded.
Your work,
open minded.

His criticism,
he\'s just too blind to see.
Your work,
such an inspiration to me.

*love you Rohit...how many times can i say u r talented? God bless...still got a prayer to speak for you & you will be touched by an angel...i know...wait & see.*

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  • 19 years ago

    by ShaAnTaNu

    Ur love is really deep 4 him.lucky rohit.all the best.keep writing
    5/5
    neeraj

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    Aww this poem was really sweet and straight from the heart.

  • 19 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    that was such a sweet thing to do, the poem was great, and so was the meaning. i don't know Rohit, but no one should stop writng just because they got a bad comment. a bad comment could help improve your work, cuz at least you know what you're doing wrong! and now that he has so many people supporting him, i think he should jus carry on! WE GOT YA BACK!

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    ooh i got it in top rated hope it stays for a while...ROHIT U ROCK...God bless you...love ya.

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Beautiful girl:) I loved it! I sure will miss him:( God Bless your words! Man, its not fair that someone with so much talent and gives he's to the people that read it... then comments can over hurt someone!!!

    *Sedusha*.....

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