by Krete Dec 21, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Gentle whisps of elegant despair, |
by Lushed
there is ABSOLUTLY nothing wrong with the ending of this poem..i love it to death. i cant believe how talented you are. its amazing |
good poem i like it keep writting |
by Incognito
Another amazing poem, well done. |
by Courtney
It's awesome I say leave it as is...its mysterious in a way, great i luved it keep writing! |
by Gracie Jo
Very good! =) As are all of your poems. Take care! |