Very good! =) As are all of your poems. Take care!

It's awesome I say leave it as is...its mysterious in a way, great i luved it keep writing!
Courtney
P.S check out some of mine if you find the time, appreciated
Cheers!

Another amazing poem, well done.
*Incognito*

good poem i like it keep writting

there is ABSOLUTLY nothing wrong with the ending of this poem..i love it to death. i cant believe how talented you are. its amazing