This is lovely. Tragecally beutiful, the dark images and comparisons created the perfect mood for the writer's message. I love the title, it really ties together the story of the piece and I really admired the lines, "just another cliche of a broken dream
just another heart ripped apart at the seam"
I love the symbolism and dark emotions portrayed in those lines. good job

thanks all of you, you've made my day :P and thanks thundersrose, i've been getting more into art over the past few months, so i've been drawing more than writing, but i missed it so much i just had to come back :) glad to be so welcomed back.

f**k u marcella wats ure problem???? i dont think ure jealous i just think URE F**KED!!! u must lead a very boring life to hav enuff time to come on here and insult ppl who are expressing their feelings not "whinning" now F**K off and leave nikki alone she is so much f-ing better that u could ever even dream to be!!! xoxoxo