Wow..an amazing poem hun. I'm sorry to hear if this happened to you, Stay strong.

Take Care, and Thank you for the kind comment on my poem. -Jess x

thanks for commenting, it means alot, it was my best friends little sis who died but cos id known her since she was born we were really close- (same friends who moved to austrlia recently- poem: i'll miss you)

thanks ur poems are relly good 2 xxx

aww...i'm so sorry that you had to experience such a death of someone in life...just keep ur head up...and keep writing poetry...u r great startin out...God Bless. <3 Heather
ps thank you for the comment.

wow Hannah..I haven't been around for awhile but coming back now(due to fiance!:) and just wanted to tell you this poem is amazing..PLEASE dont take this the wrong way because I know you're not young..lots of teens on this site and you're old ENOUGH!:) but coming from a 32 year old, you're young..and yet..THIS..is amazing!!! Wish I could have written like you when I was 15...beautiful and heartfelt and a def. 5...will read more later this week as I have time, getting late here..think you're gonna end up on my faves if they're all that good!! :)Michelle

thank you for all ur kind comments, its really helps xxx

That is soooooooo sad, well written but very sad!! its sooo great...

wow, thank you for all your comments, it really helps,

That is so sad to happen. The poem was very touching. What a fine writting at such a young age! Very impressive! Keep up the good work.
Trincy

Wow....Excellent poem!! So sorry for your loss! God Bless and take care!!

wow great poem happy days..5/5!
keep it up.. Please check out my poems.. take care

very emotioanl and heartfelt peice.....this is a excellent poem and well written. it is sad to hear things like that but easier to read of them when they have been written so greatly.

take care

yet another amazing poem..and another 5/5

it had a great beginning but you lost it towards the end. i love the message behind it though.
~Freak~