Excellent poem:) I loved it! Check some of mine if you get the chance! Keep it up! God Bless!

~!~Angel Love Sedusha~!~

Some pretty pieces of alliteration and a somber, depressing theme. Tops!!! (*insert manically cheerful grin*) Manic comments aside, I really enjoyed this poem, your use of language is lovely. Cheers,

-paperdoll