Wow...this poem was really unique...I like the way you use your words...i can't put my finger on it but this part of the poem gives me shivers...lol

"Another ice-tipped building
For one more rich man
To make a killing
Don’t forget the freak
As he lay frozen on the sidewalk
Begged his last beg this week
His words written for all to talk
With his last might
He tries to write"

Very powerful...definately loved this poem...5/5
take care
***With Smiles***
Scooby

A very strong poem, I love the way that you've linked your words together and I love the message(s)
Welcome to the site!

I really like this poem. Keep up the gud work.