Forgotten Strokes

This was a fantastic read, created much thought. I love your style!!

You are an awe-inspiring poetic magician. I look forward to reading more.

Thank you for your comments on some of my poems! Check my recent pieces when you have chance.

Kind regards
Hayley

Wow jacki. That was really good. I give it a 4 but only because i cant really connect with but really great. Keep it up! And Merry Christmas.

I love this. The words and comparisons were absolutly beautifully used. Every line was incredibly lovely, every word was so beautifully put. the piece is tragecally beautiful and full of dark imageries which are transfered to beautiful and depsairing thoughts.

"A canvas sits untouched, unveiled
lonely and forgotten, memories fade."

I love your word choice and the comparison to a canvas is just lovely. Fantastic job, excellent. Nothing but praise for this

wow..really deep poem, you captured emotion in every word....great job jacki
take care and merry christmas
scooby

Really deep poem. I love it. Keep up the good work.

Cheers.