by Ã맆îñ¥ Dec 21, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
3 years on and I remember. |
I really like this piece of work. The imagery, the lines everything seems to be perfect. But I think you have some grammatical errors. And I was wondering, maybe this poem would sound more mysterious and better if it was rhyming. Just my suggestion. But good job. |
by Amilo
Lovely poem! Dark and beautiful... you cast a good light on a normally evil character... and it has a tinge of romance... great job :) |
wow |
by ChildofGod87
Awwww... I like... I like... It was Awesome poem Girl! On my book you deserve a *5*...hehe... Hey, come and check out my new poem! Have a nice night or day:)..hehe.. God BLess! |