Awwww... I like... I like... It was Awesome poem Girl! On my book you deserve a *5*...hehe... Hey, come and check out my new poem! Have a nice night or day:)..hehe.. God BLess!

*Sedusha*

wow
that's awesome.
it sorta reminds me of the book series I read called "the Dark Angel trilogy" and the icare in the begining....keep it up you write amazingly

-Samantha

Lovely poem! Dark and beautiful... you cast a good light on a normally evil character... and it has a tinge of romance... great job :)

I really like this piece of work. The imagery, the lines everything seems to be perfect. But I think you have some grammatical errors. And I was wondering, maybe this poem would sound more mysterious and better if it was rhyming. Just my suggestion. But good job.