♥My World♥

by ChildofGod87   Dec 21, 2004


Lift me up to a world
with no evil or pain
But that's impossible

Bring me to a world
of love and passion
Then I ought to see
everyone from a different
look that is unknown
But is that possible?

I live a life that is touch
by millions of hearts
and so many souls that
I just can't count how
they've touched within me

It could be maybe just they're
wonderful warmth of caring
or they're devotion by what
they try to bring out in the world

Angels, thank you for guiding
me and everyone out there
who needs your caring touch
and your magnificent healing!!!

Copyright 2004 by Sedusha

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  • 19 years ago

    by »«¤ß詤»«

    hey im so sorry about my lack of comments my computers been brocken but anyways
    great poem its a lil different 2 ur usual stuff but still great >>5/5<< bec

  • 19 years ago

    by Guilty By Design

    hey thats a good poem. i like it

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    Awesome work girl .. im sure u've gotten that only a hundred times before but i just had to let u kno i loved this poem and i gave it a five .. nice work and keep it up .. Also, thanks for all ur helpful comments they really do help .. !

  • 19 years ago

    by Nookie

    don't we all wish we could be in a world without evil or pain? 5/5 from me. :D

    Nookie

  • 19 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    it's wonderfully written, and it's really i shame that I'm so faithless, otherwise this would have been moving. Lots of beautiful images created, and it's a a unique style. nice work.

    emma x
    (lo5t s0ul) < new profile.

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