by »«¤ß詤»« Dec 22, 2004
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
We are such good friends |
by bRiTbRiT
have you talked to her since she left? good poem 5 |
by Dorotea©
that poem reminded me of my best friend Grace who went to the states when I went to Finland....really good poem! very sweet and well written. |
by !*!Zoe!*!
Wow, this made me cry. My best friend just moved back to the States this summer. I really miss her. Beautiful.... |
by clevername
real sweet i can definitly relate. 7 of my best frieds have moved between only 4 years! it was like id make a best frend theyd move i get clsoe with someone lse theyd move and so on people jsut kept leaving i lvoe the poem and really felt it |
by John123
I like it alot.. rhyme scheme is good .. you should put the rhyme at the end of each line.. cause some was hard to follow.. but when you get into the rythm it is really great |