hi there .. thx for commenting on my poem, im glad you liked it .. your poem was great as well .. it kind of describes what i feel right now because i might be moving to another state in the summer, and me and my best friend are going through tough times because we'll be far away from each other .. thx for sharing :-)

I like it alot.. rhyme scheme is good .. you should put the rhyme at the end of each line.. cause some was hard to follow.. but when you get into the rythm it is really great

real sweet i can definitly relate. 7 of my best frieds have moved between only 4 years! it was like id make a best frend theyd move i get clsoe with someone lse theyd move and so on people jsut kept leaving i lvoe the poem and really felt it

Wow, this made me cry. My best friend just moved back to the States this summer. I really miss her. Beautiful....

xoxZoexox

that poem reminded me of my best friend Grace who went to the states when I went to Finland....really good poem! very sweet and well written.
~~soNJa~~

have you talked to her since she left? good poem 5