Undone ..

by FireCracker   Dec 22, 2004


You said you’d never leave
Obviously that wasn't true
Because here I sit writing about
How I lost you

You left, went away
With you went my heart
My feelings aren't going to change
Regardless If we're apart

So many things with you
Left undiscovered and out of place
I wish I would have known
The last time I’d get your warmth of embrace

How was I to know
That kiss would be the last
I wish I could go back and change so much I want to be in the past

You made me so many promises
You vowed not to break
How was I to know, before it ended
My heart you’d take

It hurt like fire
It hurt like a burn
Things were awesome one day
Then took an unexpected turn

I wish things would have lasted
I wish things weren’t left undone
But atleast I can say
I’d never had so much fun

Never had my smile
Been so very bright
I had never stayed up thinking of someone All night ..

My voice had never been sweeter
My heart never been so pure
And never was there one individual
I just lived for

But you came along
With your good looks and the charm And so Unententionally caused me so much harm ..

So, many things left undone
So many words unsaid
But everything from before is now gone Everything now dead

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  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    oh girl...i am SO sorry u gotta feel that way in the end but u wrote an AWESOME poem about it i esp love the first part...God bless.

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Awwwww...Maybeth, I'm sry that you have to go through this! Stay Strong girl! Don't lose any strength's:) Hang in there!! God Bless you girl, Angels will guide you to the right place;) Great poem and very well done with the details! Your on my fav.'s list:p..

    *Lots Of Love Sedusha*

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Excellent poem...a poem i could very much relate to...you are talented...take care and keep writing...FIVE>>>