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  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Excellent poem...a poem i could very much relate to...you are talented...take care and keep writing...FIVE>>>

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Awwwww...Maybeth, I'm sry that you have to go through this! Stay Strong girl! Don't lose any strength's:) Hang in there!! God Bless you girl, Angels will guide you to the right place;) Great poem and very well done with the details! Your on my fav.'s list:p..

    *Lots Of Love Sedusha*

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    oh girl...i am SO sorry u gotta feel that way in the end but u wrote an AWESOME poem about it i esp love the first part...God bless.