Hey! I loved this poem. If you ever want to talk I'm here for you. And I'm not just saying that. Seriously, anyways this poem was very good, I can relate. Keep it up-
Shalise

I loved this poem, it all made sense to me, it was brilliant brilliant brilliant, i hope your ok and i relli hope to see more of your work xxxxxx

its really deep..and very very good

i really liked that one i understand it though, maybe cause i write poems like this but i get it. it's really good nice lil twist in the end

~lil slam~