thats well good, i read an ac book abou necromancers . poems very well written

Excellent poem:) Keep on writing! Very Creative and Great Work! Check some of my poems if you get the chance! *5/5*...

*Lots Of Love Sedusha*

I really liked this. Dark imagery and dramatic text that added an additional effect to the piece. I especially like the second to last stance with the tragedy and burden of an eternity of tears added with the comparison to a god over men. I also really admored the last stance,
"
Tonight is the night for my final sorrow
If all goes well, I won't see tomorrow
They will preach my name from shore to shore
Strongest of the immortals, The God Valcore"
Beautiful words, well done

Waaahhh! I really like this poem! It's brilliant! There's a lot of darkness in there along with the strength of this God. It's really quite beautiful.

I don't understand why your poems are all rated so low...I think all that I've read up to this point is brilliant, and I'm sure the ones I'm going to read will be equally as good...You're an amazing poet, Nookie, and this poem is definetly one of your best (that I have read so far), reminds me of one of my favorite books. <3 Amazing work xxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
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