Life is hell

by Rachele   Dec 22, 2004


Life is hell
theirs nothing to gain
so with a knife
i cut my vein
my wrists bleed
i feel the pain
i watch my blood
go down the drain
i see death
and take my last breath
now I'm dead go ahead
cut my thread
i am dead

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  • 19 years ago

    by MEG!@$%

    great poem! it was really powerful. keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Very well written, I am found of these depressing poems for some odd reason. It's very repetitive, not a bad thing. Just something that could be worked on possibly. Overall I found it written perfectly. Great job.

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    sad but nice poem .. you wrote wit such truth and inspiration so i gave you a five .. awesome job !

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