by FireCracker
sad but nice poem .. you wrote wit such truth and inspiration so i gave you a five .. awesome job ! |
Very well written, I am found of these depressing poems for some odd reason. It's very repetitive, not a bad thing. Just something that could be worked on possibly. Overall I found it written perfectly. Great job. |
by MEG!@$%
great poem! it was really powerful. keep it up! |