Comments : Not such a happy ending

  • 20 years ago

    by tormented

    I just frestyled a poem, I had an idea and went with it. PLEASE COMMENT, and tell me what u think

  • 20 years ago

    by Broken

    wow...thats really really good ashley...just keep your head up, ok?

  • 19 years ago

    by tormented

    Thanks merrily and i will. I actually got the idea from the song bolivard of broken dreams. It gave me ideas to write, it kind of inspired my work on this.