Feeling!

by Katey   Dec 22, 2004


Feelings from what happened in my 1st poem.

all those people that now know,
say that they understand.
but how can they understand when it hasn't happened to them
they don't know how it feels.
they don't know what its like to have your dignity, and other things taken of you.

they say its all going to be OK.
how do they know.
they don't know the half of how you feel.
you can't explain that feeling you have deep inside.
you want to shout out at them
you can't know, you don't know!!!'

but it doesn't come out, you just stand there, staring blankly at them.

how can they feel that same feeling you halve, the one that feels empty inside.
that one that you know what you have lost, the one that got taken away from you.

they can't understand because its that feeling you get when you have been abused.
the feeling of unloved and used

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  • 15 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    4 years & still waiting <===== thats a painful feeling 2

    but the poem just gotta know how to deal with pain ;) ,

    even if it will not feel da same , great job dear

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Well i think , pepole can understand , dear, speicalyu that most of your experiecen msot of us have passed before, ayeb in a way not same intense but at least close

    i like your saying , but i hope i see more rhymig in yor poems , keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I agree with both comments above! Excellent job!
    =]
    This poem is very good!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by WitherBlisterBurnandPeel

    A like how you didn't narrow it down and you kept it open for people. No matter what problem someone is having, they can understand the feeling that the poem is showing.
    Great job :)

  • 20 years ago

    by kid

    that poem impacts a lot. i loved it, like right now im screaming inside because of how good it is. you are awesome at it.keep rockin the poems
    -iyke

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