Well I liked this poem, a lot of good imagery and you described your feelings well. Seems like there are just some jerks on here who run around rating poems 1's....

Hey i really like your free verse poem, minus a few grammar errors, and the repitition of the word Shall, being used too many times.. but other than that it is good.. and i also feel cold all the time, for many different reasons, mostly boys and lost love... but true, only getting back the lost feeling the boy has made me feel, will ever make me happy again... until then. ill be cold.. good metaphor! well please comment on my latest poems and ill do the same for you! since after all we are in the same club!

I liked your poem and can relate to it really well. Keep up the good work