your first stanza itself made me spellbound...i haven't read anything like that before...it was truely amazing...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

Omg..that was..Wow..that was excellent..The words just were so fluent..it was great..Luved it..Keep writting
Shannon

Wow, that was really good! Check out my "Forgiveness" and... um... another one... I can't think of the name right now lol. Anyway, keep it on!

~Ciao Lipton

I loved this poem:) Excellent job of work! I wish you the best of luck michael!!! *5/5*

*Lots of Love, Sedusha*
~Sweet Angel Bliss~