by FireCracker Dec 22, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
With my eyes wide open |
by Matthew Lee
Hey this was a great poem. I like it, as i read it i felt the betrayal in the relationship, the lies and the blindness of love. But at the end when sight is gained u escape the lie. I really like this all the way. |
i am so sorry i dont check out ur poems as often as i would like...but i need to u got some serious talent...God bless you hun and if u dont mind would u go to my site and leave me a comment in the guestbook as well? thanks.. |
Very nice job, I enjoyed it greatly. You are good at typing for a 99 year old.. hahah.. well anywho good jod, you're a great poet. Keep up the great work. |
beautiful poem once again...great write...keep them coming...take care and Happy Christmas...FIVE>>> |
by Chelsey
OH my gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Maybeth you have no idea how much I loved this poem..I don't know what it was but something about this peice just seriously gave me the chills!! Especially the last line..you are so very talented and just like you said I'm sure you will walk tall and keep your head up about the whole situation! Your great Maybeth it's always a pleasure reading your work! Love always, |