awww this is a really horrible story but so touching , really well wrote the last 2 lines give such a true message well done babe x

the poems really sad but its really really well written

Hey Emma thank u for commenting my poem I didn’t think ne1 was going to comment anything I wrote because I think my poems r really bad. Anyways your poems r really good I have read them all and I really like this one it’s worded really well and I know what you’re talking about. I have been abused my whole life in many of different ways. I hope that this isn’t your story or ne1 that u know because u seem to b a good person and u dont deserve to b treated like that no1 dose. Well thank u again for commenting and keep up the good writing. Hopefully u will commment on more of my poems.

pretty good not the best.