The Hard Poo

by B4BY BLU3 X   Dec 23, 2004


Sitting on the loo
Trying to do a poo

Wish I could let it rip
But I'll jus look a tip

It slides out slowly
Killing me painfully

Its tearing me apart
Trying to do this fart

I need mummy's help with this one
Its starting to hurt my bum

I need to say a prayer
Before I....*RIP*...."OH DEAR!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    This is wierd but cool nice one!

  • 17 years ago

    by Isabelle

    This was......entertaining. XD

  • 19 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    I thought that was great u made me laugh. hahahahahaha.
    Love loadz emma xxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Luke

    lmao, that was funny. but ever hear of a certain word? taboo. yea, so 5.0 cause you wrote a poem about takin a sh*t.

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiller

    lol this is funny...and thanks for commenting on my poem again

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