it was good keep up the good work

It was very good!! Continue writing!!!

I like how you left a cliff hanger at the end of the poem...this is the first poem i've seen written with one of those...interesting

wow, that is the best poem i have ever read

wowzers... firstly I loved your heading 'crazy smile' attracted me to this poem straight off. Your words are vibrant, unusual and fit perfectly. Very daunting, yet very well written.
:) thanks stacks for your comments too.

I really like your poems

Oh sad.. it had great emotion in it.. great job 5/5 oh and it was written very well

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen!~*