Keep it on the track...

by bleed_me_slow   Dec 23, 2004


He pulled up next to me revving his engine,
In his sports car he wanted to get my attention.
He thought he was bad,he wanted to race,
But i knew he'd never keep up with my pace.
I looked straight ahead n put my car into first,
he revved his engine again like it was about to burst.
The light turned green he put the pedal to the ground,
As all four of his tires went spinning around.
His car took off,moving fast.
He looked at me confused as i let him go past.
He kept on going as if he was running,
he never even saw that semi truck coming.
the lesson here is one all u speed demons should learn.
save the racing for the track cuz next time it could be your turn...

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  • 19 years ago

    by MAYBE TOMORROW

    good job found it awesomely written :)

  • 19 years ago

    by priya

    really well written the way u twisted it. i really thought the ending would be like you winning but i was wrong. people will learn from this i hope.
    later

  • 19 years ago

    by bleed_me_slow

    thanks ur r really good 2

  • 19 years ago

    by bleed_me_slow

    thanks :)

  • 19 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    wow, at first i found it funi, but u did a gud twist, it made me think hard!reli gud poem, wel dun! plz plz plz read comment and rate my poems xx