Comments : Keep it on the track...

  • 19 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    wow, at first i found it funi, but u did a gud twist, it made me think hard!reli gud poem, wel dun! plz plz plz read comment and rate my poems xx

  • 19 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    wow, at first i found it funi, but u did a gud twist, it made me think hard!reli gud poem, wel dun! plz plz plz read comment and rate my poems xx

  • 19 years ago

    by bleed_me_slow

    thanks :)

  • 19 years ago

    by bleed_me_slow

    thanks ur r really good 2

  • 19 years ago

    by priya

    really well written the way u twisted it. i really thought the ending would be like you winning but i was wrong. people will learn from this i hope.
    later

  • 19 years ago

    by MAYBE TOMORROW

    good job found it awesomely written :)