Ok that was sad, but in all honesty not ur best. Luv ya work anywayz :)
-Incognito

thats really good. it means quite a lot because i can reflect into that poem! well done with this!!
xxx

i lioke dz poem is really goood i like ur skills dont 4get 2 comment on mine

good poem, but not as good as the other one i read. the rhymes were forced in some places (e.g said and dad)

keep writing
abbi

Very good poem, but you should, at least as I see it, write proper English instead of using numbers and such. Not that I care much, but I tend to lose interest in such poems.

But still great job. Very strong message behind it, and a nice rhyming scheme