Comments : A broken heart and a numb... me

  • 19 years ago

    by Knight_of_Blackrose

    Great poem, as usual. Look at it this way, atleast your fire is still following you and still lit. Right now the flames might not light your way, but in due time your heart will mend and thaw. Your fire hasn't left you yet, don't let it smolder out so easily.

  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure


    This was awesome. I loved the rhyming pattern ... it's unique. Imagery was great. Wonderful poem.