This poem was very good! I think of stuff similar to things of that nature as well. Your a wonderful poet, with a wonderful talent. That's very sweet of you to write about the "love of you life" I hope all is well, with her. Maybe...if you would like you can visit some of my poems, especially my poem called, Invisible Window, or another one of mine called memories, those and my other one called The Hidden "Me" are my favorite of the ones that I have written. But please, if you have time read and comment on them! That'd be great! Thanks, keep up the good work!

--Amanda--

lotta philosophy there man. Awesome work. I love your profile too. Take 5/5

BOOOOOOOOOOGIE
How's it hanging???I see you got some good poems posted up, and you didnt tell me...tsk tsk..lol all kidding aside,
I really liked this poem you did a wonderful job writing it.
It makes me think about the things that we dont really examine in life but hold a great meaning to us. if that made sense..lol
anyways AWSOME job 5/5
i will come back and read some more.
take care mr.Identified.
with luv,
scooby

>>5..i enjoy reading you'r poems... they have meanings behind the words... subliminal messages, and make me consider many different theories... i dont know alot about the world yeat, considering im only 14, but im learning everyday, and i approach everything in a different manner, but what i am most inquisitive about is how do grown up people look at the world we are living in, and your poems help me answer some of my questions.