Good poem! keep it up. thanx for the comment on mine.

alwayz,
*ophelia*

This is honestly the best poem I've ever read. Because of how honest and true it sounded. I thank you so much for writing this, and expressing yourself. You have a talent little girl, you have an awesome talent. This isn't some typical poem, it's a real, vivid, imaginative poem. The tittle caught my eye, and I'm glad I ran across this. Thank you for your post about mine called Fatigued Eyes. This is def a 5/5. !!