Who are you/Who am I?

by Alyx   Dec 23, 2004


___Who are you___

Who is the person who talks to me...
Who is the person who doesn't like me...
Who is the person that cries all the time...
Who is the person that tries to make this rhyme...
Who is the person that makes me feel sad...
Who is the person that makes me look so bad...
Who is the person that makes me want to end it all...
Who is the person that laughs when i fall...
Now the answer must be true...
Who are you???

___Who am I?___

Who am I that you think you cant see...
Who am i you wish to not be...
Who am i that makes you sad...
Who am I that is so bad...
Who am i that has a double side...
Who am i that doesn't have to hide...
You can hear me...
But how can you not see me...
You see my lips move...
So why do i have to prove...
Now look in the mirror and tell me what you see...
Thats right you say,"ME???!!!!"

***I CANT WRITE POETRY GOOD AT ALL BUT PLEASE VOTE AND COMMENT***

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  • 19 years ago

    by kid

    i dont like when people put themselves down and say they cant write poetry when in FACT they CAN. so yeah im m talking about you ,"who am i" to say that huh? well im a girl that believes you do have talent and you can go far. dont doubt yourself because the poem wasnt that bad. read between the lines
    -iyke

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