This is my poem

by Rachele   Dec 23, 2004


This is my poem
forever i roam
away from my home
withdrawn from the crowd
without speaking out
my weakness
is my bleakness
my sadness drives me into madness
until i get to the point
where I'm just plain insane
is this your game?
ill take no blame
this is mi poem for all you peoples at home

*OK i know its bad but please vote and comment it would mean allot to me*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Gill

    hey
    i know you think that poem was bad, but i think it was awesome! i luv poems that rhyme..and urs was..i dunno it wuz just kewl! i luv poems that dont rhymes as well..but w/e urs did so i liked it as well ahah

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Hey Rach, I think your poem was good. The rhyming was good, and well, I just liked the way you wrote it. lol. Thank you for the comments, it means a lot to me.

    Merry Christmas!!
    ~Grace

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