Hey Rach, I think your poem was good. The rhyming was good, and well, I just liked the way you wrote it. lol. Thank you for the comments, it means a lot to me.
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i know you think that poem was bad, but i think it was awesome! i luv poems that rhyme..and urs was..i dunno it wuz just kewl! i luv poems that dont rhymes as well..but w/e urs did so i liked it as well ahah