Come Closer, Come In

by Danielle   Dec 24, 2004


Rocks erode
Adrenaline hides
And feelings corrode
No escape this time
Come closer
Come in
Metal grinds
Wire bends
Several are finds
As cold descends
Come closer
Fall over
Come in
Wood splinters
A hidden esquire
A voice whimpers
Powerful desire
Come closer
No cover
Come in
Hearts relapse
Fire drowns
As thoughts collapse
A siren sounds
Come closer
It hovers
Come in
A blow of anger
Puts up a strong fight
Behold the danger
Into the night
Come closer
Don't fluster
Come in
The silhouette lies
Flesh is torn
To run it tries
But black has worn
Come closer
A choker
Come in
Cut to pieces
Screams of regret
Pain releases
Soon it will forget
Come closer
Dream soaker
Come in
Internal sabotage
Betrayal, distrust
A cornered edge
Be mindful of lust
A legacy, this spirit
Kindled over black

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  • 19 years ago

    by EJ

    Hey i really liked that.. It was written well and the style was awesome!! great job.. bye bye EJ

  • 19 years ago

    by paperdoll

    It took me a few moments to catch a hold of the rhyming patterns but by merely saying it aloud you can tell what a great rhythm this poem has to it. I like the short, sharp punch of each phrase and the fear inspired by it.

    Great work, I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

    -paperdoll

  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure


    I totally didn't understand, and I think that's why I liked it so much. It was a brilliant poem ... [as has been stated before] ... I really liked the style of it, and the repetition. Excellent job. Definate, well deserved 5.

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    I've honestly never read anything like this.
    The read was as rapid as I've heard speak of.
    Excellent suspense throughout. (5)

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    dang girl this is friggen awesome.....pssh umm i am friggen speechless thanx a lot..lol

    God bless
    love heather craig

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