dang girl this is friggen awesome.....pssh umm i am friggen speechless thanx a lot..lol

God bless
love heather craig

I've honestly never read anything like this.
The read was as rapid as I've heard speak of.
Excellent suspense throughout. (5)

I totally didn't understand, and I think that's why I liked it so much. It was a brilliant poem ... [as has been stated before] ... I really liked the style of it, and the repetition. Excellent job. Definate, well deserved 5.

It took me a few moments to catch a hold of the rhyming patterns but by merely saying it aloud you can tell what a great rhythm this poem has to it. I like the short, sharp punch of each phrase and the fear inspired by it.

Great work, I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

-paperdoll

Hey i really liked that.. It was written well and the style was awesome!! great job.. bye bye EJ