by Unseen Exposure Dec 24, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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by Erika
I love your poem, your writing is beautiful. I know that spilling all your feelings into paper, in this case the computer helps a lot. This shows that from sadness something beautiful always grows. Keep on the good work... |
by Amilo
Well, I like your use of vivid language, and the entire poem overall, but I think the rhythm sometimes falters a bit, and the rhyme scheme is a bit predictable.. |
hey, I have read this before, i just don't like to comment, cos I feel like I'm saying the same as everyone else. good stuff, awesome work. |