hi nice poems, keep up the good work =) I gave you a 5... Please check out my poems...comment/rate it would mean a lot to me..

Merry Christmas

I just had to say that I relate to this so much, it's strange how much I relate to this. but anyway
I really like the subject you chose and the story you put behind the piece. Your choice of words and how you formatted them gave a dramatic effect, and I admire that. Good job