Wow, this is a really go0d poem. I guess alot of people can relate to the girl in the poem. Wonderfully written.
Take care,

;;^^Kalah

There's nothing wrong with the length, it's awesome. I like it. Take care.
-nick

its not too long, and it is powerful. it is amazing how so many people out there have masks and no one knows. it must have been hard to get so many rhmymes.. good job.