awww! =[ that was so cute. probably my favorite one by you. check out mine if you get a chance... have a nice xmas!
much love,
-Cheerfully Cynical

that was sad. really good though. great job! 5

very awesome.
I'm sorry that your dad does that to you...
It used to happen to me too.
But I told someone and poof he was gone.
But he is still around...
but not that much.
I hope the best for you and that you come out of this depression and stop plotting your death. =(
anyway I sort of got off topic lol.
I loved your poem, perfect absolutely PERRFECT!
5/5 from meee..
take care.
mann I write long comments =P

That was really good.

LOTS OF LUV
SHAWNDA

Omg this poem is so sad..If this really happened to you I am so sorry. If you ever need someone to talk to I'm here. .>3jess