Slashed (Rewritten)

Look..
Eye to eye..
Darkness Corrupting..
You lying..
Me crying..
Nothing working..
Life dieing..

Slashed!!

Death..
All to happy..
Suicide..
Final escape..

Slashed!!

Bloody wrists..
Pain of relief..
Tears of the others..
Tears of joy..
Do their tears show I'm gone..

Written ??/??/01
Rewritten 12/25/04

This is one of my first poems, but rewrote.

Ian Robert Potapoff